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14 September 2008 @ 04:19 pm
A Sad Onesided Ficlet.  
Okay, so this is not a happy teoph ficlet but hey, experience the bitterness and happiness as well. Too much happy can make your teeth rot.


He could walk now, thanks to Katara's abilities.

He could jump. He could run. He could dance. He could kick. He could do what normal guys do.

He looked wistfully at the petite earthbender teaching her student. A surge of adoration and despair flushed through him. The feeling of pain intruded into his chest, a familiar guest, as he spots her punch Aang hard on the arm--her way of showing affection.

He may be able to run, but compared to Aang's steady progress, he was a mere limping fool.

Prompted by the word: LIMP

TeaRoses: Tophrosehiptea on September 14th, 2008 11:30 pm (UTC)
That is sad but I liked the characterization. (Anyway I agree with you that not everything has to be happy.)
dlamiss on September 14th, 2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
Yay thank you =3

Maybe I'm in a melancholy/emo mood. I just wrote another unrequited love situation for Azula and Sokka this time. LOL
Frith: zeishamrockjolnes on September 15th, 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
Poor Teo! D: Sequel: Toph gives him hugs, yes?

Very well done. For some reason, it reads as a sort of poem, with the ending being very poignant.


dlamiss on September 15th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
Thank you =3

Happy hug or a bittersweet one? I might write a little ficlet to continue this. Poor Teo =(